Writing Term 4

I am learning to: Describe a sea creature from the story Commotion in the Ocean.

What I need is: 
Describing words
What the animal is
What the animal looks like
What the animal does


It lives in the ocean. It is blue with a white tummy. It has white teeth and they are very sharp. It eats hundreds of people and is very scary. It also eats hundreds of fish. Sharks are very dangerous. In Australia they are in a big tank or at SeaWorld or Sydney.


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